Based of the feedback I received, I changed what exactly was said and how I went about saying it. Before it was too long (now its sort of short). I definitely like the constructive criticism for sure.
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
Based of the feedback I received, I changed what exactly was said and how I went about saying it. Before it was too long (now its sort of short). I definitely like the constructive criticism for sure.
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Hello Alagana,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a very good job. You were most definitely not monotone and changed your expressions throughout the pitch. In order to hit that minute marker maybe you can try explaining your business idea a bit more, perhaps specifying how it will work, or how you plan to start everything, that is what i did for mine. If you'd like to see my elevator pitch you can check it out at this link: http://ent3003img.blogspot.com
Hey Alagana!
ReplyDeleteGreat job man! I can definitely see how this idea can really help many people save money and prevent their scooters from weather damage. However, I am worried about how easy it is for a bigger company to steal this idea. I'm also curious if there are other things out there on the market that are just like it? I feel like some company has to create it. Keep up the great work man! Here is the link to my elevator pitch! http://adventuresofentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html
Hi Alagana! I liked watching your video because I actually have a scooter and I always leave it outside and this has lead to problems. In fact, many people have issues with their scooters not starting in the winter because they leave them outdoors in the cold for so long. Do you think that your cover would help or solve this problem? Feel free to check out my post.
ReplyDeletehttp://laurasici.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html